Louisa Clack

Hey, thansk for all your critiquing, please tell me how to improve this? x Chapter 4 I can see the early sun filtering in through the cave archway. So much ...

Thanks all those who have been reading and reviewing, here is newest chapter, written 4 and a bit of 5 but needs opinions on this one. Warning first readers, this ...

Hi, thank for replies, they are all incredible and mean so so much to me =D Taken advice in leaving a line in between writing. Tell me what you think ...

Ah I liked this. Not sure I like Toby though. Am I meant to? Does he feel too sort for himself? What place is he in right now? Any friends? ...

Awwh. Gay love. Poor Ginny. Lol. Nver read anything like this before, new way to look at thing I guess haha. Very funny. Dumbledore next? x

I loved the introduction to this, with the song and the black figures. I cried when George dies in the book but this didnt actully make me feel sad. It ...

Lmao!!! If J.K Rowling wre to ever read this I'm sure she would find it hirlarious. An erotic hogwarts... Niiiice Lol Very funny Awesome stuff. Careful to keep the characters ...

1. Circus Boy Chapter 1 2. Fantasy 3. Internet Explorer I am n and I have reviwed lots of work and it lets me post but then it says it ...

This made me smile, so thank you =) I like your sns of humour, you could make a book of mini stories of alternate fairy tales! Are the pigs prostitues? ...

I liked this, its really interesting Not sure hwre its going though and there are no senses of character or plot really. If you made it more into a poem ...

Err. I'm not sure about this. Whr's it going? Careful, you repeat yourself. And.. Rosie wouldn't show her magic to muggles, so she wouldnt be unaccpted for that reason..??

Awwh this is a sad song =( But still good =) What sorta style is it? Like it, but might b a bit mainstream, shake it up with some new ...

Whoa, this is really really good. Strugglinh to criticise you. I would pay money to read this, try and get pulished! Um, I think Leo needs to react to the ...

Hmm very good. I like the fact that this is from a bad guys point of viw, a nice change. However. I don't like the opening sentence, it can be ...

I'm afraid I only read up to part 2, but I will read the rest later. Really really good, liked this a lot. Be careful not to get too wrapped ...